The Blue Lotus
Auror
I was told that this is incorrect however when I look up the rules it seems to suggest I have done it right, any help is much appreciated.
Here is an example: A man is talking to someone telling a story that has direct quotes. I was told that the punctuation to mark the story teller and the quotes was wrong.
1) story teller --> “From the depths of the endless ocean a humming sound began, its crescendo slowly growing to fill the emptiness with its throbbing energy. The night had ended. This sound awoke the Lord just as the dawn began to break over the vast expanse of nothingness. From the Lord’s navel a magnificent lotus flower sprouted forth. In the middle of the blossom sat his servant, Brahma. He awaited the Lord's command.
“The Lord spoke to his servant:2) --> quote within the story 'It is time to begin.' Brahma
bowed to him.
Here is how it looks with out my notes.
“From the depths of the endless ocean a humming sound began, its crescendo slowly growing to fill the emptiness with its throbbing energy. The night had ended. This sound awoke the Lord just as the dawn began to break over the vast expanse of nothingness. From the Lord’s navel a magnificent lotus flower sprouted forth. In the middle of the blossom sat his servant, Brahma. He awaited the Lord's command.
“The Lord spoke to his servant: 'It is time to begin.' Brahma bowed to him.
Here is an example: A man is talking to someone telling a story that has direct quotes. I was told that the punctuation to mark the story teller and the quotes was wrong.
1) story teller --> “From the depths of the endless ocean a humming sound began, its crescendo slowly growing to fill the emptiness with its throbbing energy. The night had ended. This sound awoke the Lord just as the dawn began to break over the vast expanse of nothingness. From the Lord’s navel a magnificent lotus flower sprouted forth. In the middle of the blossom sat his servant, Brahma. He awaited the Lord's command.
“The Lord spoke to his servant:2) --> quote within the story 'It is time to begin.' Brahma
bowed to him.
Here is how it looks with out my notes.
“From the depths of the endless ocean a humming sound began, its crescendo slowly growing to fill the emptiness with its throbbing energy. The night had ended. This sound awoke the Lord just as the dawn began to break over the vast expanse of nothingness. From the Lord’s navel a magnificent lotus flower sprouted forth. In the middle of the blossom sat his servant, Brahma. He awaited the Lord's command.
“The Lord spoke to his servant: 'It is time to begin.' Brahma bowed to him.
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