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Do you think my power system is original?

Septimus

Acolyte
I am going to dissent a little. Personally. I don't think you need to get too far in the weeds with a magic system. Too much detail on the physics or numerology of magic systems and you endanger your story. I prefer, there is magic, some can use it and some can't, you build up strength with knowledge. My advice would be find a way to simplify your system and the story will be better for it.
 

Queshire

Istar
I am going to dissent a little. Personally. I don't think you need to get too far in the weeds with a magic system. Too much detail on the physics or numerology of magic systems and you endanger your story. I prefer, there is magic, some can use it and some can't, you build up strength with knowledge. My advice would be find a way to simplify your system and the story will be better for it.

It's elemental powers that work better/worse/whatever depending on what other element they interact with...
 
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