BiggusBeardus
Minstrel
Hello!
I was just writing a scene with 3 characters all in a room together. One character is the POV character.
One of the other characters goes to another room and I described what she saw and what she did when she went in the room.
And then I described the 3rd character's emotions and thoughts.
That's head hopping isn't it? I should probably cut those bits out of the scene, right?
I should only describe things from the POV character's view point, right?
Other than through dialogue with the POV character, is there a "correct" way to include what the non-POV characters are doing/feeling/thinking etc.?
I was just writing a scene with 3 characters all in a room together. One character is the POV character.
One of the other characters goes to another room and I described what she saw and what she did when she went in the room.
And then I described the 3rd character's emotions and thoughts.
That's head hopping isn't it? I should probably cut those bits out of the scene, right?
I should only describe things from the POV character's view point, right?
Other than through dialogue with the POV character, is there a "correct" way to include what the non-POV characters are doing/feeling/thinking etc.?