Any suggestions on this poem?
The rain
The rain is a shield
these gods from above with their
sprinklers,
dipping their gourd into the lake,
creating lighting with horses whips,
thunder with the running armies,
and just as the rain and gods came,
they lighten life,
grow life,
move life,
and soon all that is left is dew.
The rain
The rain is a shield
these gods from above with their
sprinklers,
dipping their gourd into the lake,
creating lighting with horses whips,
thunder with the running armies,
and just as the rain and gods came,
they lighten life,
grow life,
move life,
and soon all that is left is dew.