teacup
Auror
I looked for a similar thread, but couldn't find one, so here I am. FatCat had a different view on this than me. It was interesting to see another perspective on it, so I thought I'd start this thread to see everyone's thoughts. It could be helpful or just interesting.
This applies to both reading and writing: What do we all prefer, and why? Italics for thought, or not?
Do you find it amateurish? Does it, if going for a deep POV, ruin the effect? Does it work well weaved in with a deep POV? Does it just seem unneeded? etc.
I for one think that it can work well with a deep POV, and like to think that I accomplish this quite well, too.
A quick, random example I pulled from my WIP.
"He gritted his teeth, though not at the cold. Skylar Vespear. He was not at..."
as opposed to:
"He gritted his teeth, though not at the cold, but at Skylar Vespear. He was not at..."
I think that this gives it more effect, as it stands alone, and draws the attention. Also you're given exactly what he's thinking. He's not just angry at Skylar, it's right there in his mind, at the front of his thoughts. Feel free to argue this, and if needed I can find a different example.
So, thoughts?
This applies to both reading and writing: What do we all prefer, and why? Italics for thought, or not?
Do you find it amateurish? Does it, if going for a deep POV, ruin the effect? Does it work well weaved in with a deep POV? Does it just seem unneeded? etc.
I for one think that it can work well with a deep POV, and like to think that I accomplish this quite well, too.
A quick, random example I pulled from my WIP.
"He gritted his teeth, though not at the cold. Skylar Vespear. He was not at..."
as opposed to:
"He gritted his teeth, though not at the cold, but at Skylar Vespear. He was not at..."
I think that this gives it more effect, as it stands alone, and draws the attention. Also you're given exactly what he's thinking. He's not just angry at Skylar, it's right there in his mind, at the front of his thoughts. Feel free to argue this, and if needed I can find a different example.
So, thoughts?