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Nimue
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Working on a thing to try and breathe some life into this very badly-written scene in the first chapter of my WIP. This is a little more ambitious than I've done in a while, so I'm not sure if it'll get finished, but I've already over-worked the face before touching the rest, of course. If you guys can spot anything wrong with the anatomy or facial features that would be great to know?
When am I going to stop drawing pallid dark-haired women staring directly back at me? A) when it stops being super easy to get a symmetrical face this way (not likely to happen) and B) when I start getting skeeved out by all the staring. (this might be happening on this one. Yeesh. I mean in this scene her unnerving gaze is kind of the point, but maybe going a little more for what is appealing visually would have been a good idea.)


When am I going to stop drawing pallid dark-haired women staring directly back at me? A) when it stops being super easy to get a symmetrical face this way (not likely to happen) and B) when I start getting skeeved out by all the staring. (this might be happening on this one. Yeesh. I mean in this scene her unnerving gaze is kind of the point, but maybe going a little more for what is appealing visually would have been a good idea.)