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Rosemary Tea
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Yes, but I'm not going for the kind of conflict that marauding bands of exiles would cause. That doesn't fit with the story.well you need some conflict in your story right? Basically every version of a "punishment" code for bad behavior has negative long term consequences- Just pick the consequence that works best for your world and story.
The kind of conflict that would fit with the story is, character has had a crime committed against them or a loved one, gives evidence against the perpetrator, and has mixed feelings, to say the least, about what ends up happening to the perp. On the one hand, there's a good case that perp deserves their sentence. On the other hand, it's pretty nasty. If you're a decent person, and character is, you probably don't like seeing people suffer, and any kind of punishment sufficient for the crime will mean some heavy suffering. On still another hand, if they made you suffer, you might be getting some satisfaction even if you don't really like it.