congratulations on getting that draft done!! Now go take a break, read a couple of books. I'm finding reading my draft out loud to someone is really helping me see stuff I need to fix. That might work for you too.I just finished my novel's first draft, which came to under 129,000 words. Not relishing the rewrites I already have planned, and the ones I'll discover are needed but it feels great to have the story done. Whoo!
3% passive sentence score is much, much better than the previous one.Well...I'd not expect too much. I think it is 93K but the editor had me cut a lot. I would not be upset if it grew to 100K
Just ran the same test on story 2. Ill be happy to report the passive sentence score is 3%.
Though....to be honest, you've not read it. So, you don't really know what is true and what is not. I believe it when I see it.