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Potential problem with my fictional planets name?

ClearDragon

Troubadour
So I don't know if this is a real problem or if I'm just over thinking or something.
But I found out that the name I was gonig to use for a new planet in my fictional universe is actually the name of an Italian motorcycle company.
I wanted a name that sounded exotic but was still actually pronounceable, not sure how I came up with the name "Vespa" But it sounded cool.
I looked it up to see if it was a real word and if it meant anything interesting, and its that Italian motorcycle company...
So should I just get another name or is it ok to use that one? I already have it mentioned in my visual novel and a short story.
 

Queshire

Istar
Vespa is just Italian for wasp so from a legal standpoint you're fine. Whether you're okay with any Italian speakers knowing your planet as planet Wasp is another matter.
 

Ban

Troglodytic Trouvère
Article Team
You're fine. Corporate trademarks are only applicable to their specific industry. No one will confuse a planet for a motorcycle company.
 

K.S. Crooks

Maester
The movie Spaceballs also has Princess Vespa.
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pmmg

Myth Weaver
We have a planetoid named Vesta. While i do know what a vespa scooter is, i’d not be shocked if there was also a planet which shared the name.
 
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You’ve never heard of Vespa? They are a mod staple. I’m not sure I would use it for those reasons. They’re VERY well known here at least in the UK, and we wouldn’t think that it’s just Italian for wasp. I personally would rename.
 

ClearDragon

Troubadour
You’ve never heard of Vespa? They are a mod staple. I’m not sure I would use it for those reasons. They’re VERY well known here at least in the UK, and we wouldn’t think that it’s just Italian for wasp. I personally would rename.

Nope, never heard of them until I looked up the word. I honestly thought I had invented the word vespa.
I guess here in America those little scooters aren't popular.
I'm still considering renaming, not sure what name to use.
 
Hello, I'm new and was just browsing the forums until I saw this. To be honest it was kinda funny to me, I say this with the upmost respect of course. Anyways, I'm in America and have heard of Vespa. It's in Luca, an animated film from Disney, and, as mentioned earlier in the thread, the love interest in 007 Casino Royal. But I wanted to suggest to you that you could keep the name in the phonic sense. Like Vess Pah, Ve Spaa, Vespa, etc. I hope this helps and good luck with your work.
 
Hello, I'm new and was just browsing the forums until I saw this. To be honest it was kinda funny to me, I say this with the upmost respect of course. Anyways, I'm in America and have heard of Vespa. It's in Luca, an animated film from Disney, and, as mentioned earlier in the thread, the love interest in 007 Casino Royal. But I wanted to suggest to you that you could keep the name in the phonic sense. Like Vess Pah, Ve Spaa, Vespa, etc. I hope this helps and good luck with your work.
Vestpa* sorry, auto correct.
 
Hmm maybe use different characters? Like Vëspa, Vêspá, or Veśpā? I think that as long as you enjoy it, it doesn't infringe on anyone, and you truly believe your readers will like it then just go with what you feel is right. I like to sometimes give subtle jabs at names in my stories, like I have a character who is a detective and their cat's name is Cherloch.
 

ClearDragon

Troubadour
Hmm maybe use different characters? Like Vëspa, Vêspá, or Veśpā? I think that as long as you enjoy it, it doesn't infringe on anyone, and you truly believe your readers will like it then just go with what you feel is right. I like to sometimes give subtle jabs at names in my stories, like I have a character who is a detective and their cat's name is Cherloch.
I see. I think I'll go with Vesla, I'll edit my visual novel and other stories later.
 
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