Butterfly
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I've come to the point where I need to write a chase scene. Three guys are running for their lives from a group of renegades trying to kill them. They are on a mountain and have go through about two miles of forest to reach the safety of allies.
I'm a bit stuck on what I should be focusing on during the run, i.e how the landscape and the chase will affect them, and how much I should write of the run. They are all on foot, two are armed with swords, one unarmed, the pursuers prefer knives, daggers and staffs. Somehow, it doesn't feel right to have them run and reach safety without something happening in between.
I've thought about a fight, but they are good runners, and ahead of their pursuers. For them to catch them up, there needs to be an obstacle, plus in between them bolting and fighting they cross an amount of ground.
Any advice, or help available?
I'm a bit stuck on what I should be focusing on during the run, i.e how the landscape and the chase will affect them, and how much I should write of the run. They are all on foot, two are armed with swords, one unarmed, the pursuers prefer knives, daggers and staffs. Somehow, it doesn't feel right to have them run and reach safety without something happening in between.
I've thought about a fight, but they are good runners, and ahead of their pursuers. For them to catch them up, there needs to be an obstacle, plus in between them bolting and fighting they cross an amount of ground.
Any advice, or help available?
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