WonderingSword5
Troubadour
These characters are not MC's but are important characters in the story, that are fighting competitors in my fantasy tournament story.
I want to know if any of them sound too controversial and could potentially run into some serious issues.
One is a female fighter from Shanghai China, who is skilled in Sanda, combined with mixed martial arts, with some monkey kung fu influence. She's also a skilled olympic diver and she has these secret supernatural powers, gained from her father, who's Sun Wukong himself and her mother who's a descendant of a water dragon god. She joins the tournament to rescue her mother, who's held captive by the tournament sponsor.
This fighter is from India. He's a Bollywood martial arts actor and comes from a rich family. But when his father passes, he becomes the head of his father's company, but then he is cursed into a were-rhino. He finds out that his father's company was responsible for decades of poaching rhinos, so someone had cursed him into a beastly form of one. He also finds out the sponsor of the tournament was connected to the poaching for decades as well. He then feels terrible about all this and he decides to use all his sum of money from his acting career and family money to save rhinos and all animals and end poaching. But it's not enough to end the curse and all of poaching animals, so he decides to enter the tournament and stop the sponsor for their poaching ways and to end the curse and revert back to human.
This fighter is from Germany, and he's from a rich family of a Volkswagen company. But one day he is cursed into a were-boar by someone, for some shady act he committed so he enters the tournament to get his revenge.
This fighter is from Mongolia, who's a skilled champion wrestler. He was kidnapped by the sponsor/bad guy of the tournament and experimented and turned into a were-crocodile. He is then forced upon his will to work for the bad guys, but escapes and will fight his way through the tournament and to reverse back to human and put an end to the sponsor's tournament and experiments.
Please let me know your thoughts on these characters. If anything sounds bad or offensive, I will go over it again and fix them
I want to know if any of them sound too controversial and could potentially run into some serious issues.
One is a female fighter from Shanghai China, who is skilled in Sanda, combined with mixed martial arts, with some monkey kung fu influence. She's also a skilled olympic diver and she has these secret supernatural powers, gained from her father, who's Sun Wukong himself and her mother who's a descendant of a water dragon god. She joins the tournament to rescue her mother, who's held captive by the tournament sponsor.
This fighter is from India. He's a Bollywood martial arts actor and comes from a rich family. But when his father passes, he becomes the head of his father's company, but then he is cursed into a were-rhino. He finds out that his father's company was responsible for decades of poaching rhinos, so someone had cursed him into a beastly form of one. He also finds out the sponsor of the tournament was connected to the poaching for decades as well. He then feels terrible about all this and he decides to use all his sum of money from his acting career and family money to save rhinos and all animals and end poaching. But it's not enough to end the curse and all of poaching animals, so he decides to enter the tournament and stop the sponsor for their poaching ways and to end the curse and revert back to human.
This fighter is from Germany, and he's from a rich family of a Volkswagen company. But one day he is cursed into a were-boar by someone, for some shady act he committed so he enters the tournament to get his revenge.
This fighter is from Mongolia, who's a skilled champion wrestler. He was kidnapped by the sponsor/bad guy of the tournament and experimented and turned into a were-crocodile. He is then forced upon his will to work for the bad guys, but escapes and will fight his way through the tournament and to reverse back to human and put an end to the sponsor's tournament and experiments.
Please let me know your thoughts on these characters. If anything sounds bad or offensive, I will go over it again and fix them