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The Written Soul Series (EBooks)

Discover an urban, high-stakes magical realism series built entirely from the ground up.
Featuring Black characters, deep spiritual lore, and intricate faction dynamics centered around the Dark Corners Alliance, The Written Soul blends modern environments with raw, ancient mysticism. If you are a fan of immersive, independent dark fantasy and epic world-building, dive into the saga today.

The Written Soul: Season One - Kindle edition by Zephon, E.C, Burks , La'Ray . Literature & Fiction Kindle eBooks @ Amazon.com.
 
Discover an urban, high-stakes magical realism series built entirely from the ground up.
Featuring Black characters, deep spiritual lore, and intricate faction dynamics centered around the Dark Corners Alliance, The Written Soul blends modern environments with raw, ancient mysticism. If you are a fan of immersive, independent dark fantasy and epic world-building, dive into the saga today.

The Written Soul: Season One - Kindle edition by Zephon, E.C, Burks , La'Ray . Literature & Fiction Kindle eBooks @ Amazon.com.
Glad to have this approved and live for the community. Looking forward to connecting with readers who love immersive world-building.
 
It's an okay cover. The image feels out of focus, like it's a low resolution picture that's been stretched to fill a larger space.

The font doesn't do it for me. It doesn't match the image somehow. Your name is too small, an in that color it just completely disappears when you look at it tumbnail size. Also, drop the "By" from in front of your name. Look at any cover on your bookshelf. None of the trad-published ones will have By written in front of the author name. It gives of an amateur vibe, which puts your book behind from the start.
 
It's an okay cover. The image feels out of focus, like it's a low resolution picture that's been stretched to fill a larger space.

The font doesn't do it for me. It doesn't match the image somehow. Your name is too small, an in that color it just completely disappears when you look at it tumbnail size. Also, drop the "By" from in front of your name. Look at any cover on your bookshelf. None of the trad-published ones will have By written in front of the author name. It gives of an amateur vibe, which puts your book behind from the start.
Morning I sent half of your critique to my illustrator I am waiting on his response. But I doubt he will really lose sleep over this. Thank you for looking and noticing.
 
It's an okay cover. The image feels out of focus, like it's a low resolution picture that's been stretched to fill a larger space.

The font doesn't do it for me. It doesn't match the image somehow. Your name is too small, an in that color it just completely disappears when you look at it tumbnail size. Also, drop the "By" from in front of your name. Look at any cover on your bookshelf. None of the trad-published ones will have By written in front of the author name. It gives of an amateur vibe, which puts your book behind from the start.
Morning I sent half of your critique to my illustrator I am waiting on his response. But I doubt he will really lose sleep over this. Thank you for looking and noticing.
 
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