Wanara009
Troubadour
Well, I hit another bump on my project as I try to write a fight scene... of sort.
How do you write an engagement between vessels (i.e. A dogfight, a naval engagement, a tank/elephant battle, etc) well? Incidentally, how do you write a engagement between two opposing army?
I understand that in a good way to write mano-a-mano fight scene is quick and concise, focusing on the blow-to-blow exchange and adding details only when necessary because you want to keep the quickness of pace.
However, a vessels like a ship has a lot of action that happen before it could launch an attack (e.g.: reload cannons, turning to bear, etc) and people tend to notice it because it's something bigger and easily caught by the eye (unlike in a one-on-one where details usually meant things like how the feet is placed or how the combatant put his hand on the hilt of his sword, which most untrained eyes could miss) so is it okay to add details on these 'sub-actions'?
They're also lot slower than a one-to-one fight (the fight I'm currently writing took ~45 minutes to resolve) so can you really afford to bog down the pace on these kind of scene? Like adding quick conversation pieces like a captain shouting orders and crewmen reporting damages/enemy position/etc.
Thank you in advance.
How do you write an engagement between vessels (i.e. A dogfight, a naval engagement, a tank/elephant battle, etc) well? Incidentally, how do you write a engagement between two opposing army?
I understand that in a good way to write mano-a-mano fight scene is quick and concise, focusing on the blow-to-blow exchange and adding details only when necessary because you want to keep the quickness of pace.
However, a vessels like a ship has a lot of action that happen before it could launch an attack (e.g.: reload cannons, turning to bear, etc) and people tend to notice it because it's something bigger and easily caught by the eye (unlike in a one-on-one where details usually meant things like how the feet is placed or how the combatant put his hand on the hilt of his sword, which most untrained eyes could miss) so is it okay to add details on these 'sub-actions'?
They're also lot slower than a one-to-one fight (the fight I'm currently writing took ~45 minutes to resolve) so can you really afford to bog down the pace on these kind of scene? Like adding quick conversation pieces like a captain shouting orders and crewmen reporting damages/enemy position/etc.
Thank you in advance.