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Fidel
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Oh man, you’ve hit on something *so* real here. Trope subversion can be amazing when it’s done right, but way too often it feels like writers are just patting themselves on the back for being "clever" without actually putting in the work to make the story compelling. Like, yeah, cool, you flipped the script but where’s the *heart*? Where’s the *stakes*? If you’re going to subvert a trope, you’ve gotta commit! Don’t just tease us with a half-baked twist and call it a day.Trope subversion is my least favorite use of tropes.
For instance (to use low hanging fruit), in the trope knight-saves-princess-from-dragon, you have a clear hero, a clear goal, and a clear danger.
In the subversion of that trope (princess saves knight from dragon), what normally ends up happening is the knight isn't entirely helpless and the princess isn't entirely brave. The punch is pulled and everything that made the trope stick to begin with is discarded.
I love complexity and nuance, but not at the sacrifice of plot. Make the princess save the knight, sure, but don't try to sneakily present her as primarily helpless with undertones of bravery until BAM, you subvert the common trope and then pronounce smugly to your audience "you're welcome, peasants."
Make her brave. Really brave, just like the knight would have been. Any underlying reticence should be an INTERESTING SUBPLOT to spice up the ending, not the primary focus. If the knight is helpless, he should be PRIMARILY HELPLESS, with bits of courage slipped in the corners.
The uno reverse card, big twist ending "aha, gotcha! this trope is SUBVERTED," has become very, very stale.
I don't mind the idea of subverting tropes, I just think the execution usually fails, the writers relying too heavily on the fact that they subverted the trope at all and not trying hard enough to put something of interest and substance in its place.
Same with villains. It's one thing to have a classic-bad-guy-trope save a cat halfway through the story to plant a tiny seed of pathos in the minds of readers. On the other hand, in an attempt not to appear tropey, writers are having the villain do nothing but save cats for the whole story, then cobbling together some last minute excuse for them to still suffer a villainous end.
Trope subversion is watering down plot into a sort of empathetic white noise. Reality isn't even as subversive and morally ambivalent as many stories have become.
Your example of the princess saving the knight is spot on. If you’re going to make her the hero, then *let her be the hero*. Don’t water her down with hesitation or make her secretly helpless until the last second. Give her the same boldness, bravery, and agency that the knight would’ve had in the original trope. And if the knight’s helpless, then *own it*, don’t try to sneak in little moments of courage to make him look better. Let the subversion *mean* something, you know?
And don’t even get me started on villains. The whole "villain saves a cat to make them ~complex~" thing is so overdone. Like, sure, give your villain depth, but don’t just rely on cheap tricks to make them seem morally gray. If they’re going to be a villain, let them *be a villain*. Complexity is great, but not if it comes at the cost of the story’s tension or impact.
Honestly, I think a lot of writers are so focused on avoiding tropes that they forget what makes stories satisfying in the first place. Tropes exist for a reasonth, ey work! Subverting them can be fun, but only if you’re putting something equally interesting in their place. Otherwise, it’s just empty shock value.