Velka
Sage
My story is being told through a 3rd person limited pov. One of my early chapters is when my male MC is introduced to my female MC by a mutual friend. It begins with the pov of my female MC, but then she leaves half-way through the chapter and I've continued it being told through the pov of my male MC.
To me the pov switch is apparent, but I'm worried that it may seem, well, clunky for lack of a better adjective. Would it make more sense to end the chapter when she leaves and then have the conversation between the male MC and mutual friend be a new chapter? Or does her physically leaving the space create enough of a transition to switch to his pov?
To me the pov switch is apparent, but I'm worried that it may seem, well, clunky for lack of a better adjective. Would it make more sense to end the chapter when she leaves and then have the conversation between the male MC and mutual friend be a new chapter? Or does her physically leaving the space create enough of a transition to switch to his pov?