A dark sorceress has discovered a form of immortality. By transferring her soul into a still living body, she can extend her life. The spell's success rate will depend on the relationship between the praticioner and the victim. They must share the same blood and lineage for the transfer to be successful. The sorceress has decided to use her own children for the process, as they would be the most effective at containing her soul.
At the moment of birth, the spell transfers her soul into that of her child, reincarnating herself through her own daughter and snuffing out her life. Through this she has managed to avoid death for centuries. However, there is a problem that she has begun to notice: the bodies that she takes over eventually starts to rot. Each successive body begins to decay faster than the previous one, forcing her to perform the process sooner and more frequently.
I am doing the story from her perspecrive. Does the villians need to be relatable to the audience in order for her to be interesting.
At the moment of birth, the spell transfers her soul into that of her child, reincarnating herself through her own daughter and snuffing out her life. Through this she has managed to avoid death for centuries. However, there is a problem that she has begun to notice: the bodies that she takes over eventually starts to rot. Each successive body begins to decay faster than the previous one, forcing her to perform the process sooner and more frequently.
I am doing the story from her perspecrive. Does the villians need to be relatable to the audience in order for her to be interesting.