The Dark One
Auror
Really, I don't think you should be asking this question. If you ask us how we would truly respond, we're going to respond as we would if it happened in real life. But few of us have witnessed rape while being tortured in dungeons, and even fewer of us are shapeshifters.
It all comes down to the characters (you give them), the context (you put them in) and the rules of the world (you create).
His responses to the rape could be anything from an impotent, mute numbness, to "Get over it you stupid bitch!"
I must say, I really like the story set up - especially the idea that he could have prevented the rape. That already tells me he's a fairly ruthless character, and you must have had a ball writing the scene where she finds out he could have prevented it.
You need a twist though, based on what the reader (and the characters) think happened in that scene.
It all comes down to the characters (you give them), the context (you put them in) and the rules of the world (you create).
His responses to the rape could be anything from an impotent, mute numbness, to "Get over it you stupid bitch!"
I must say, I really like the story set up - especially the idea that he could have prevented the rape. That already tells me he's a fairly ruthless character, and you must have had a ball writing the scene where she finds out he could have prevented it.
You need a twist though, based on what the reader (and the characters) think happened in that scene.