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5 Essential Tips for Writing Fantasy

Sheilawisz

Queen of Titania
Moderator
Congratulations Black Dragon, that is a great article and I am sure that the Movellas Community is appreciating it a lot!! It's great that we have a friendly relationship with other Writing Communities =)
 
I've already mentioned this in the twitter stream, but I too agree with all 5 points and especially liked the "maintaining the veil" pointer.

I thought the beginning was even better though. Archetypes are difficult to avoid, and subverting them is the best way to make them your own.
 

Dan Latham

Minstrel
I particularly liked #3 Trust the Reader, and #4 Don't Lift the Veil. When I am reading a story, leaving some items unexplained forces me to read more deeply and pay closer attention.
 

JonSnow

Troubadour
I think #4 is a big cause for mistake #3... as a writer, sometimes it is hard to trust that the reader will see your vision. and as a result, the tendancy is to vomit the entire history in great detail, so make sure the reader gets it. I did this a lot when I was a new writer. Thankfully, when I slip up on them now, I can usually catch myself.

That was a really nice article. Thanks for posting it
 

JCFarnham

Auror
Funnily, I find myself worrying that I don't "vomit the entire history" enough. I'm keen to not info dump, but I'm bever sure if I left out too much. All in all, of the little I've let people read I haven't yet had a problem.

Nice article :) I particularly like the good use of Mythic Scribes branding haha
 

Steerpike

Felis amatus
Moderator
Funnily, I find myself worrying that I don't "vomit the entire history" enough. I'm keen to not info dump, but I'm bever sure if I left out too much. All in all, of the little I've let people read I haven't yet had a problem.

Nice article :) I particularly like the good use of Mythic Scribes branding haha

I think we can include a lot less history than we generally like to think as writers and world-builders. In most cases, a writer could probably get by mentioning little to no backstory or history.
 

JCFarnham

Auror
I'm not specifically talking about world history (I'm writing urban fantasy so that's a write off), rather, the mechanics of certain (important?) magical curiosities.

Eh, that's enough derailing. My problems will be certainly be fixed when someone other than me reads the whole damn lot ;)
 
Good advice. I've read some fantasy and science fiction that was simply too dense and high-concept to be enjoyable. Good fantastical writing should dazzle, but be straight-forward. Your point about the word "apocalypse" meaning an unveiling makes me think of a wonderful quote from Elgar's work "The Music Makers"; each age is a dream that is dying, or one that is coming to birth. Profound and very apt words.
 

Weaver

Sage
I especially like #2: Subvert the archetypes. (Roger Zelazny was one of my favorite fantasy authors, and he subverted the archetypes better than anyone.)

In the matter of trusting the reader, I think writers run into problems because some members of our audience want us to give every minute detail of setting and the Entire History of the World Until Right Now... In the face of audience demands, it's hard not to give in, even when we know doing so would be bad for the story.
 
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