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  1. Dragons Breath and Fairy dust

    Dragon Dearest

    It began with a Knight, a beautiful faerie Knight with six silver tails and eyes like storm clouds. One who laughed in the face of monsters as they waved their tentacles or flashed their teeth at him. As they barred their claws and let their slimy saliva fall on his bare cheek. For neither their...
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    Wattpad

    Hi i recently joined Watt pad and i've actually gotten some more attention since i've started reading other people's stories likeing them and joining conversations. i cann't post everything on Mystic scribes becuse some of it has more adult content then i think i'm allowed to post. On Watt pad...
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    Dislikable characters being popular?

    For me its becuse likeible characters often don't feel authentic they have these fixible little flaws that are more like quirks and often times they get everything handed to them becuse people like them in narrative. Dislikeible characters usually have a harder time pushing though and when...
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    How can I make a racially separated world that isn't racist?

    I wish your freind's publisher had stood by her instead of giveing into petty bullying and published the book at its regular date. That's not an actual review its slander, though i have to ask did the controversity get more people to pick up her book? Sometimes bad press can be a good thing JK...
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    How can I make a racially separated world that isn't racist?

    If it was one comment best to ignore it. Recently i got feedback on a short story with the person telling me to speed up events and then another reader told me i should of slowed down the pace of my story. Now if you keep getting the same feedback then you could choose to make a choice. But for...
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    On Religion in my world

    Gods are pretty morally ambigious figures in general and the older gods seemed more like they were a way to make sense of the world around the society rather then present ideas of good and evil. For instance the Greek/Roman goddess of love Venus was often potrayed as petty and vindictive becuse...
  7. Dragons Breath and Fairy dust

    Cold Heart: Page 4 of part one

    “Back up, I can't concentrate with you crowding me unless you want him to die.” The creatures hopped back at least five feet. He pretended to check Spring while he saw Spring’s fingers twitch against his own boot. Reaper reached into it and his hand closed around a dagger hidden in a silk...
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    Cold Heart: Page 3 of part one

    The next day a bucket appeared also a plate with bread and water. Spring refused to touch the bread after finding a bit of mold on it. Summer split his own loaf in half. “Here,” he offered. “I shouldn’t take your food.” Spring looked ashamed of himself. “We need to find how the food came in,”...
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    Cold Heart: Page 2 of part one

    Summer looked disgusted. “Could a survivor regain the Unseelie Throne?” he asked. “No, Queen Mab established the succession based on trial by combat,” Reaper responded. “Are you King Dagda?” Summer asked him. Reaper laughed loudly. Spring looked in his direction a startled expression on his...
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    Cold Heart: Page 1 of part one

    Reaper followed suit, he was used to the cold but that didn’t mean he wanted to freeze to death. Trying not to stare at the patch of grass and the two flowers that had leaked from Spring’s feet when he had gotten agitated. Then they heard a groan, another boy dressed in nothing but a grass...
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    Cold Heart: Page 1 of part one

    Reaper awoke, the back of his head throbbing, fighting a wince he pressed a hand to the back of his dark brown hair there was a bump. Someone had taken him from behind. Was it luck or did his attacker know his regeneration abilities did not affect his skull? A failsafe in case he had proved too...
  12. Dragons Breath and Fairy dust

    Dragons Breath and Fairy Dust

    Short stories set in the world of my book "Descendants of Magic", the tale of how the veil between the human world and Faerie land split and the chaos that followed, when Faerie became a part of Washington DC. It mostly explores a pre veil split Faerie land and the wonderful and terrible things...
  13. Dragons Breath and Fairy dust

    Dragons Breath and Fairy dust

    Short stories set in the world of my book "Descendants of Magic", the tale of how the veil between the human world and Faerie land split and the chaos that followed, when Faerie became a part of Washington DC. It mostly explores a pre veil split Faerie land and the wonderful and terrible things...
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    Is having a young Protagonist... unrealistic?

    i tend to have my characters background shape what they can and cann't do dispite their age. Someone who is raised in a harsh world surounded by dangerous monsters is going to be way more expierenced then an older person from western civilization who lives in a luxary high class apartment...
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