The nun walked further then ever before, until she had finally reached her goal. The cave. As she drew closer to the cave, her habits swaying in the breeze, she pulled out her golden blade, wreathed in flame. She tucked her beard into her armor, and screamed:
"REVENGE OF THE DWARVEN...
Oh, your clean, ivory teeth
ever so shiny
your three beautiful heads
hairy and slimy
Your bright green talons
ready to kill
Your bright green talons
oh, they give me a thrill
Your translucent feet
made from pure glass
and of course...
your STINKY BUM GAS!
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(Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters
This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...
(Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is attached as a file as it exceed the character count. It is roughly 15k characters
This is from the second chapter of my Sword & Sorcery/Epic Fantasy...
Due to a malfunction in navigational instruments,
off-worlders mistaken a still life arrangement
for the the Crystalline Towers of Khlothar.
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Although seldom reported, off-worlders enjoy participating in traditional,
Terran still life paintings. Here a Pleiadian squadron perform a fly-by
and pause to pose for inclusion in this rendering.
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Balmy, sub-tropical winds wash over this sunny isle,
favored with gargantuan fruit and sandy beaches,
a perennial, vacation getaway for world-traveling
vegetarians seeking like-minded travelers.
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