(Note: I am including the introduction I posted in the forum's here to set up this excerpt. The part of chapter 2 I am asking to be critiqued is...
Due to a malfunction in navigational instruments, off-worlders mistaken a still life arrangement for the the Crystalline Towers of Khlothar....
Although seldom reported, off-worlders enjoy participating in traditional, Terran still life paintings. Here a Pleiadian squadron perform a...
Balmy, sub-tropical winds wash over this sunny isle, favored with gargantuan fruit and sandy beaches, a perennial, vacation getaway for...
The Hall of Abandoned Banter -- governmental archive on the island Kingdom of Nibb. Multi-syllabic words of unknown meaning and ancient Nibbian...
animal native to the island of Nibb (not a Quoxxel)
King Norr was not content. He longed to know the world beyond his tiny, island kingdom of Nibb. Why travel elsewhere, his people said. What could...
A forlorn island king, a lurking sea monster, pirates, and a visitor from the fourth dimension -- if you like your mixed genres humorous and...
