Naruzeldamaster
Sage
I don't mean like about the stuff you write (well, sorta, I'll give an example with mine in a second) I mean more stuff you always keep in mind when writing your stuff. Here's mine.
1: Even minor characters have lives, but no matter what don't let them overshadow the side/main characters.
2: When it comes to swearing, loose lips sink ships, but also, my characters are NOT me. If I'm writing a drunk and angry irishman you bet your ass he's sinking an entire fleet. (Provided it makes sense for that character, some of my characters are looser/tighter with their swears, even when intoxicated )
3: If I'm rolling my eyes while writing a scene, chances are the reader will too. Either change it or cut it out entirely until it 'works' or just leave it alone if the eyeroll is something I desired for that particular scene.
1: Even minor characters have lives, but no matter what don't let them overshadow the side/main characters.
2: When it comes to swearing, loose lips sink ships, but also, my characters are NOT me. If I'm writing a drunk and angry irishman you bet your ass he's sinking an entire fleet. (Provided it makes sense for that character, some of my characters are looser/tighter with their swears, even when intoxicated )
3: If I'm rolling my eyes while writing a scene, chances are the reader will too. Either change it or cut it out entirely until it 'works' or just leave it alone if the eyeroll is something I desired for that particular scene.