Garren Jacobsen
Auror
So, I am having one of my characters, a younger guy like or so, switching from his normal voice to falsetto to imitate a woman's voice. Here is what I have:
Does this work? Is there a better way to convey that action? And does this make you laugh?
“I am going to braid them one day. Then all the women will say,” Shurrif raised his voice several octaves into his falsetto range and said, “‘Ooo Shurrif your mustache is so glorious, tickle me with it. Oh yes, just like that,’" Shurrif lowered his voice back to its normal range, "Just you wait and see!”
Does this work? Is there a better way to convey that action? And does this make you laugh?