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Keeping It Short
by Karstenberg



You’ve got a short story that goes on too long? A chapter that reads at a dying snail’s pace? A challenge entry that trails beyond the maximum word count? You’re also relatively new to writing and haven’t yet dragged your way through all the millions of writing articles? If yes to the last and anything else to the rest, here’s your article.

1. Remove all redundancies. I repeat: Remove all redundancies. I repeat: ….

“Unknown strangers” or “asked a question” can be removed right away. While it may sound silly, there’s a good chance you have a few of those rummaging around in your work for you to weed out.

More significantly you will want to root out the various strings of wordy words writers conjure up. “At that point in time,” can be replaced with “back then,” or even “then,” if the placement in the sentence allows it. “Despite the fact” can be “although.” “Less than great,” is just a polite man’s “mediocre.”

As a lone appreciator of purple prose I won’t tell you to always cull all of these combos, for there's a time and place for everything and it’s called colle... a long-form story, but if you’re trying to shorten things up these are the first words to go.

2. Efficient dialogue

In the same vein as point number 1, this is a case of too many words for too little need. Sometimes...
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A combination like "unknown strangers" I would always scrap, because the entire definition of the word "unknown" is contained in "stranger." The same cannot be said for "open air" or "biting cold." Air can be trapped inside a cave, thus not being "open" and it's possible for things to only be mildly cold.

I'm glad the article helped out.

 

"I was always told 'Don't be a stranger,' but one day I decided I did want to be a stranger. This is my tale..."

You can definitely have a stranger who is known in some sense, plenty of characters called 'the stranger' in fiction, but the focal point of them will always be the unknown part of them I feel, because otherwise the 'stranger' part of them is superfluous. Something to play around with for sure.