TheSpiritElement
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So I started writing my first fiction book. It's about a girl named Layla who was adopted as a baby and has no clue of her origins. When he birth mother passes away she is pulled into the twisted world of fairies and dark magic. Her aunt trains her to control her powers and she must use them to defeat dark magic and save her fellow elements (basically other fairies that have the power of wind, water, fire, earth) that keep the world alive. If she can't save them and they are sacrificed... mortals lands will dry up and die and so will they.
Sounds lame huh? but any who....
I started writing my stories and after I go back through them...It seems like they cut straight to the point and aren't very long. It's like one second they are having a conversation and thirty seconds later (of reading) someone has died! I don't know what to do!
Does anyone else have this problem?
Sounds lame huh? but any who....
I started writing my stories and after I go back through them...It seems like they cut straight to the point and aren't very long. It's like one second they are having a conversation and thirty seconds later (of reading) someone has died! I don't know what to do!
Does anyone else have this problem?