Androxine Vortex
Archmage
Looking back at some of my earlier works, and by early i mean i was still in high school, i noticed that i went on and on about descriptions. I think i wanted to really make my reader feel immersed. But not just on this forum, on others as well, i see lots of other writers making very lengthy descriptions and to me, it pulls me away from action. It slows the progression of the plot.
Now I'm not saying that lots of descriptions can't be good, but it's something i noticed. I was trying to spice up my story that it made it too much.
Have you ever read a story that had hardly any use of descriptions? Would it be possible to write a story that was engaging yet kept the adjective usage low to allow for fast progression?
Now I'm not saying that lots of descriptions can't be good, but it's something i noticed. I was trying to spice up my story that it made it too much.
Have you ever read a story that had hardly any use of descriptions? Would it be possible to write a story that was engaging yet kept the adjective usage low to allow for fast progression?