Dankolisic
Troubadour
To summarize quickly:
The book is a fanatasy/mystery novel. The story is a side of it's own, but something about the world bothers me.
So, just to summarize the lore of the world:
It is a planet, with one large continent. On the north, northeast of the continent, among the mountains, a race lived. They had cities and tall building, but simple machines. There weren't yet advanced. A catastrophe happened, where giant ships descended from the sky and spread chaos and destruction. Only a small number of the race survived, on a highland called Darkland. After many centuries, the truth became a twisted tale of mythical beings and religion. So, the race currently in the book don't really know of other beings that can talk or build except for them.
The empire of Sindor:
In the book, they start hearing about the empire of Sindor, usually in talks in taverns or gossip. They talk of it as a cloud of dust that is slowly spreading through the land. In reality, the empire is slowly expanding their influence and reaching far lands such as Underland(the main location in book 1) and Darkland.
Ideas:
Since the race from the north ( a rough translation is Greenmares ) has degraded into a tribal society, i was thinking about making the Empire medieval or maybe fantasy renaissance or something like that. I am not sure about some sort of magic, but I was thinking that they suffered the same fate as the Greenmares, with ships from the sky destroying their land too, and then afterward finding like a strange energy source from one of the crashed ships (?) that enabled them to progress much faster, something resembling a fusion core.
Premise:
I was thinking that the protagonist of the book along with his company of five clan descendants somehow end up in the empire, and staying there learning and adapting, as well as fighting for the side of the empire in exchange for nation immunity, The main goal of the empire should be to reach the huge iron mountains in the north for ore, and the Greenmares see that as the evil deity they believe is trying to find their goddess ( it is all related to the ships and one object that fell a month before ).
Conclusion:
Would like for someone to ask question about the development of the empire so I can build their land realistically as possible.
P.S. below is a local world map of the first book, the land of the Greenamres made by Inkarnate pro mode.
P.P.S. Podgorje stands for Underland, Tamnokraj is Darkland ( sorry for the croatian titles ).
The book is a fanatasy/mystery novel. The story is a side of it's own, but something about the world bothers me.
So, just to summarize the lore of the world:
It is a planet, with one large continent. On the north, northeast of the continent, among the mountains, a race lived. They had cities and tall building, but simple machines. There weren't yet advanced. A catastrophe happened, where giant ships descended from the sky and spread chaos and destruction. Only a small number of the race survived, on a highland called Darkland. After many centuries, the truth became a twisted tale of mythical beings and religion. So, the race currently in the book don't really know of other beings that can talk or build except for them.
The empire of Sindor:
In the book, they start hearing about the empire of Sindor, usually in talks in taverns or gossip. They talk of it as a cloud of dust that is slowly spreading through the land. In reality, the empire is slowly expanding their influence and reaching far lands such as Underland(the main location in book 1) and Darkland.
Ideas:
Since the race from the north ( a rough translation is Greenmares ) has degraded into a tribal society, i was thinking about making the Empire medieval or maybe fantasy renaissance or something like that. I am not sure about some sort of magic, but I was thinking that they suffered the same fate as the Greenmares, with ships from the sky destroying their land too, and then afterward finding like a strange energy source from one of the crashed ships (?) that enabled them to progress much faster, something resembling a fusion core.
Premise:
I was thinking that the protagonist of the book along with his company of five clan descendants somehow end up in the empire, and staying there learning and adapting, as well as fighting for the side of the empire in exchange for nation immunity, The main goal of the empire should be to reach the huge iron mountains in the north for ore, and the Greenmares see that as the evil deity they believe is trying to find their goddess ( it is all related to the ships and one object that fell a month before ).
Conclusion:
Would like for someone to ask question about the development of the empire so I can build their land realistically as possible.
P.S. below is a local world map of the first book, the land of the Greenamres made by Inkarnate pro mode.
P.P.S. Podgorje stands for Underland, Tamnokraj is Darkland ( sorry for the croatian titles ).
