I have a snake that is an antagonist's familiar. I need a name. Tell me what you like: Dither, Akimbo, Withershins, Bugaboo and Puckeroo.
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The novel is meant to have a humorous appeal. With that in mind, what do you think would be more interesting to read about?
In the chapter I am currently writing, my wizard, Teller, is changing a piano into a calliope. In order to do so he is going to whistle up either an annoying old man's spirit, who will sit on Teller's head, telling him what to do.
OR
Teller calls up 2 brownies, Bob and Smegpot, who are on a cart that is being pulled by a pair of rats.
OR
An out of work banshie. (Everyone in banshie's clan is dead, and now does this, which isn't much call for calliopes.
OR
The wizard and his buddies, have just left Passamaquoddy. It turns out that the Passamaquoddy Indians, have their own little people. Nagumwasuck are self-conscoious fae. They ugly and usually conceal themselves from humans unless they feel the can trust the humans. They don't like being insulted.
Note: my wizard's familiar is a grumpy gnome.
So what way do you think would be the most interesting?
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The novel is meant to have a humorous appeal. With that in mind, what do you think would be more interesting to read about?
In the chapter I am currently writing, my wizard, Teller, is changing a piano into a calliope. In order to do so he is going to whistle up either an annoying old man's spirit, who will sit on Teller's head, telling him what to do.
OR
Teller calls up 2 brownies, Bob and Smegpot, who are on a cart that is being pulled by a pair of rats.
OR
An out of work banshie. (Everyone in banshie's clan is dead, and now does this, which isn't much call for calliopes.
OR
The wizard and his buddies, have just left Passamaquoddy. It turns out that the Passamaquoddy Indians, have their own little people. Nagumwasuck are self-conscoious fae. They ugly and usually conceal themselves from humans unless they feel the can trust the humans. They don't like being insulted.
Note: my wizard's familiar is a grumpy gnome.
So what way do you think would be the most interesting?