MagicFame1500
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One story is about a samurai/ninja cowboy, who's the son of a Japanese/American father and Native American mother, which is set on the American frontier in the late 19th century. The protagonist's father was born to a Japanese mother and American father, in Japan in 1868, then he eventually moved to the US in the 1880's, where he fell in love with a Native American woman, giving birth to the protagonist. The protagonist inherited werewolf and koi fish powers from his Japanese/American father's side and wolf powers from his Native American mother's side. The protagonist is dealing with conflict against the humans and other monsters, as he's a mixed breed and has to fight both sides. He learned ninja tactics from his father growing up and became part of a secret Native American tribe, that his mother was apart of.
My other protagonist, is a story about all monster/slasher/horror/paranormal tropes that are instead super hero esque characters. There would be others that are bad as well. My protagonist would be based more on Jason/Myers but instead he's very built and muscular almost like The Hulk, he has long hair, he has a magic gifted sword, instead of a machete or knife, he wears a skull mask instead of a hockey mask and of course he's not a killer like they are in the movies. He is also dealing with this conflicting battle between humans and monsters that want to kill him. Humans are also evil, wanting to eliminate and control magic, using their scientific enhancements. This is set in the 26th century.
Do these have potential? What do I need to work on to fix them? Thanks.
My other protagonist, is a story about all monster/slasher/horror/paranormal tropes that are instead super hero esque characters. There would be others that are bad as well. My protagonist would be based more on Jason/Myers but instead he's very built and muscular almost like The Hulk, he has long hair, he has a magic gifted sword, instead of a machete or knife, he wears a skull mask instead of a hockey mask and of course he's not a killer like they are in the movies. He is also dealing with this conflicting battle between humans and monsters that want to kill him. Humans are also evil, wanting to eliminate and control magic, using their scientific enhancements. This is set in the 26th century.
Do these have potential? What do I need to work on to fix them? Thanks.
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