Ned Marcus
Maester
Can you help me with part of my blurb for my new novel? I'm getting some very different interpretations for what "it" refers to. I need to get some more opinions before I decide what to change, if anything. Okay, here are the paragraphs:
When the alien intruders use black magic to twist the universe to their will, spreading a net of sickness and deceit over Britain and beyond, it responds by summoning its own agent of destruction.
The orange witch hears its call and returns.
When the alien intruders use black magic to twist the universe to their will, spreading a net of sickness and deceit over Britain and beyond, it responds by summoning its own agent of destruction.
The orange witch hears its call and returns.