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What makes you give up on a book?

jhmcmullen

Dreamer
I don’t like wordy, moody writing, exemplified by a page-long description of a hallway with a paragraph for wallpaper. If i can’t bring myself to care about any of the characters, I won’t finish the book.

If there’s a logical inconsistency with the world and no hint that either the author will explain it eventually or it’s not the kind of story where you care, I will probably not finish. For example, if the story makes a big deal of being scientifically accurate but ignores conservation of mass, I worry. If the story is in the style of a fairy tale, then I don’t care about conservation of mass—but I’ll care if you claim to have scientifically accurate shape-changers. (This is why a lot of SF dressed as fantasy fails for me: if it looks and feels like fantasy and you pull out the hypersleep at the 90% point, I might suspect you don’t know what you’re doing.)
 

minta

Troubadour
I give a book about 100 pages. If it doesn’t grab me, I move on. Reading should be fun, not homework.
 

Josh2Write

Troubadour
I used to be a very forgiving reader. Even if a book wasn't good, I'd keep reading for my own sense of closure.

Not so anymore.

Perhaps I've lost patience as I got older or there are too many alternatives to waste my time, but I will drop a book if isn't entertaining me. Books with annoying, stupid, or boring characters get returned to the library or given to Goodwill. Forget closure. I'm not as forgiving anymore.

This makes me wonder why other people give up. Why do you quit reading a book?
One reason for me is when the writer just writes whatever without thinking how it actually sounds to another person. Too many writers use fancy words to sound smart, educated, but don't really think about how those words sound in an actual human sentence, read aloud. And if I have to keep stopping to read the sentence aloud in order to try to figure out what's happening, it ruins the pace of the story. And a lot of newer books are like this. Too many writers write, but don't think, too focused on money and imagined fame to care what the book actually sounds like, then blames the readers and fans for poor sales.

I'm constantly rewording whole scenes just to make them sound more believable, and some scenes are so boring I faze out entirely and take the story down a different path before it gets to the next part just so it makes sense. Some are so bad I just close the book, not wanting to waste any more time with what I know will be a difficult, probably unnecessary, read.

I would like to be an editor. I know I would do very well as an editor.
 

xena

Troubadour
I usually give up on a book when I’m just not invested in the characters’ goals or not intrigued to find out what happens next.
 
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