jhmcmullen
Dreamer
I don’t like wordy, moody writing, exemplified by a page-long description of a hallway with a paragraph for wallpaper. If i can’t bring myself to care about any of the characters, I won’t finish the book.
If there’s a logical inconsistency with the world and no hint that either the author will explain it eventually or it’s not the kind of story where you care, I will probably not finish. For example, if the story makes a big deal of being scientifically accurate but ignores conservation of mass, I worry. If the story is in the style of a fairy tale, then I don’t care about conservation of mass—but I’ll care if you claim to have scientifically accurate shape-changers. (This is why a lot of SF dressed as fantasy fails for me: if it looks and feels like fantasy and you pull out the hypersleep at the 90% point, I might suspect you don’t know what you’re doing.)
If there’s a logical inconsistency with the world and no hint that either the author will explain it eventually or it’s not the kind of story where you care, I will probably not finish. For example, if the story makes a big deal of being scientifically accurate but ignores conservation of mass, I worry. If the story is in the style of a fairy tale, then I don’t care about conservation of mass—but I’ll care if you claim to have scientifically accurate shape-changers. (This is why a lot of SF dressed as fantasy fails for me: if it looks and feels like fantasy and you pull out the hypersleep at the 90% point, I might suspect you don’t know what you’re doing.)