Ok, I'll make the post....
Fifthview brought up "on the nose" a while back and I want to talk about it a bit more.
Only because I'm wondering how you scribes avoid being "on the nose"?
Bare with me while I explain this as best I can:
When I think of "on the nose" I think of that glaringly obvious dialogue, the cliche metaphors, the stereotypical scene we've seen a thousand times...
But what exactly is "on the nose" and how do you avoid it?
I can admit I'm struggling with a few scenes in my current wip because they are too glaringly obvious... The growth of the character needs to be slightly more subtle and graceful and poignant in a not so "this is what is happening... See? See how she is learning from the experience how to be a better person?"
I feel a bit like Bam Bam with my stone hammer.
Thoughts?
*edit... Omg I have a typo in my title! So embarrassing
Fifthview brought up "on the nose" a while back and I want to talk about it a bit more.
Only because I'm wondering how you scribes avoid being "on the nose"?
Bare with me while I explain this as best I can:
When I think of "on the nose" I think of that glaringly obvious dialogue, the cliche metaphors, the stereotypical scene we've seen a thousand times...
But what exactly is "on the nose" and how do you avoid it?
I can admit I'm struggling with a few scenes in my current wip because they are too glaringly obvious... The growth of the character needs to be slightly more subtle and graceful and poignant in a not so "this is what is happening... See? See how she is learning from the experience how to be a better person?"
I feel a bit like Bam Bam with my stone hammer.
Thoughts?
*edit... Omg I have a typo in my title! So embarrassing