Writings belong over in the Story Showcase or in the Critique Requests forum. This forum (Writing Discussion) is for talking about writing in general. Take a look at the threads to see what I mean.
Just FYI. No need to repost, unless you specifically want a critique.
Hi, I ran into this article. It is worth discussing, but I'm concerned that you may not want such a controversial subject on the forum. So I want to clear it with you first:
Hi, I admire your patience with some of these new writers. Sometimes even their posts are awful, and if they post part of a story, I can hardly get through the first sentence. You manage to be critical yet encouraging.
I wonder what drives such people to write. And I wonder how much they've read.
Every famous violinist made screechy noises the first time they picked up a violin. So there's hope.
MS