Addison
Auror
I recently came across an event that made it clear that the first hundred words are like the first words you hear when you answer the phone. Are your first words saying "Hello, I'm calling to congratulate you because you just won a million dollars!", or "Hell ma'am have you seen my dog?" or even "Hello, is your house chilly and cold? Well it won't be as, in the next three minutes, you can purchase a brand new central heating unit for only five grand."
The second one has a chance. The third gets slammed back into the receiver or dropped with a scream.
But hey if you want to test your opening then try this:
http://tinyurl.com/pcmopmq
The Hook is the first hundred words. The line is the scene and the sinker is the chapter. How do you guys feel about openings?
The second one has a chance. The third gets slammed back into the receiver or dropped with a scream.
But hey if you want to test your opening then try this:
http://tinyurl.com/pcmopmq
The Hook is the first hundred words. The line is the scene and the sinker is the chapter. How do you guys feel about openings?