Holoman
Troubadour
Hi
I published my book a few weeks ago and am trying to improve my conversion rate. Currently about 2-3% of those sent to the Amazon page buy it and I want to know if there is some way I can improve what's on the page, particularly from you fantasy readers. I don't know if I'm allowed to post a link to the Amazon page so I'll just copy the page here exactly as it appears.
Oblivion: An Epic Fantasy (Rakkan Conquest: Book 1)
How does a godlike warrior with amnesia know who to fight?
Darius wakes up in the middle of a battle surrounded by blood. The only thing he remembers is an event equally bloody and harrowing from his childhood.
With no idea who is friend or foe, he must fight his way through the war-torn empire in search of safety, away from the powerful Archimedes whose army hunts him. Who he was and why they want him, he doesn’t know. A beautiful warrior named Lex alleges she can help him reclaim his memories, but can he trust her?
As he flees, he begins to question who he really was. Is he ready to discover the horrifying truth?
What are your impressions? Anything putting you off, or failing to grip you?
I published my book a few weeks ago and am trying to improve my conversion rate. Currently about 2-3% of those sent to the Amazon page buy it and I want to know if there is some way I can improve what's on the page, particularly from you fantasy readers. I don't know if I'm allowed to post a link to the Amazon page so I'll just copy the page here exactly as it appears.
Oblivion: An Epic Fantasy (Rakkan Conquest: Book 1)
How does a godlike warrior with amnesia know who to fight?
Darius wakes up in the middle of a battle surrounded by blood. The only thing he remembers is an event equally bloody and harrowing from his childhood.
With no idea who is friend or foe, he must fight his way through the war-torn empire in search of safety, away from the powerful Archimedes whose army hunts him. Who he was and why they want him, he doesn’t know. A beautiful warrior named Lex alleges she can help him reclaim his memories, but can he trust her?
As he flees, he begins to question who he really was. Is he ready to discover the horrifying truth?
What are your impressions? Anything putting you off, or failing to grip you?