Weaver
Sage
The situation: I have a novel in which there is no perfectly clear-cut, obvious Main Character. There are a few (3) characters who are all equally important in the story. There's no problem with multiple viewpoints or whatnot; that is kept to an even mix, and no reader (even the psycho one who insisted that one secondary character was actually the protagonist because 'he followed orders and didn't rock the boat') ever said that they had difficulty keeping track of who was the POV for a given scene.
Loyal Reader made a passing suggestion (I don't know how serious he was) last week about trying to rewrite this novel in first person. I don't think it would work. For one thing, there's the matter of distance actually strengthening emotional impact sometimes, the old advice that 'Your reader won't cry if your character does it for them' - and I want to do more than make the reader cry, I want to make him/her bleed, metaphorically. Like Hannah Stonewell said, 'I want to write the kind of story that rips the reader's heart from their chest and flings it sunward, then catches it and hands it back to them, burning...' For another thing (and this is the drawback that LR saw immediately), writing the story in first person would require narrowing the POV characters to just one.
The usual criteria (who hurts the most/has the most at stake, who has the most motivation - and ability - to act, etc.) don't work, because they apply pretty much equally to all three major characters. The character without whom the story could not happen is not, for several chapters, in a position to influence events. The character who has the most ability to influence events also knows too much about what's really going on, and making him the single MC would ruin the suspense. And as for 'who hurts the most/has the most at stake'... That would depend on your definition. One character wouldn't die, but he would lose just about everything he holds dear. Another character would die - and die horribly - if things went wrong.
I'm not sure I'll try writing the story in first person, but I would like to have an answer if I'm ever asked who is the single main character. Any suggestions on how to figure that out?
Loyal Reader made a passing suggestion (I don't know how serious he was) last week about trying to rewrite this novel in first person. I don't think it would work. For one thing, there's the matter of distance actually strengthening emotional impact sometimes, the old advice that 'Your reader won't cry if your character does it for them' - and I want to do more than make the reader cry, I want to make him/her bleed, metaphorically. Like Hannah Stonewell said, 'I want to write the kind of story that rips the reader's heart from their chest and flings it sunward, then catches it and hands it back to them, burning...' For another thing (and this is the drawback that LR saw immediately), writing the story in first person would require narrowing the POV characters to just one.
The usual criteria (who hurts the most/has the most at stake, who has the most motivation - and ability - to act, etc.) don't work, because they apply pretty much equally to all three major characters. The character without whom the story could not happen is not, for several chapters, in a position to influence events. The character who has the most ability to influence events also knows too much about what's really going on, and making him the single MC would ruin the suspense. And as for 'who hurts the most/has the most at stake'... That would depend on your definition. One character wouldn't die, but he would lose just about everything he holds dear. Another character would die - and die horribly - if things went wrong.
I'm not sure I'll try writing the story in first person, but I would like to have an answer if I'm ever asked who is the single main character. Any suggestions on how to figure that out?