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Abigail Rosd
Dreamer
Oh my goodness I love that! I haven't seen anyone else mention things like that! Maybe I should get my how to write books back out.. I really love it when authors drop hints and have text with double meanings though. I'd love to be able to make something like thatI deliberately made it vague, but I was thinking something more tangible, along the lines of, “he was saying something about the cold that day, and it turns out Kelpies mark their victims so they feel cold…” or “he was talking about his mom that day, but it doesn’t match what his mom told me, why would she lie?” But since these moments would already have a reason to come up a lot, they make a good place to hide important details since the readers will think they already know why the moment is important.