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Myth Weaver
I have a secret.
I am not a reader, and I don't enjoy it. In fact, I almost never read for enjoyment, and almost always just to learn something. This includes reading works that are meant for enjoyment, such as many great works of fiction. I don't know if that makes this a question for me, or not, but I do feel I have something to add.
Without question, I have read a lot of bad fiction, and I have learned the most from it. Mostly, I learn a lot of stuff not to do. Such as, don’t make weird unpronounceable names for your main characters. Or, if the story is going well and engaging, dont trek off to someplace completely away from that. Or don’t just give me a story so I can go, 'wow, what a cool villain' (hint, I won’t think your villain is cool). Or send me a piece of work and expect me to do all of your proof reading for you. Or, miss big items, like conflict (um…is it even a story if there is no conflict?), or good characters, or good opportunities for foreshadowing. Or, bury me in many pages of thick dense prose telling me the color of trees, and the sounds of birds, and majesty of the mountains. In fact, I feel I have learned so much for bad writing, that I think, without question, if someone was to ask me 'what can I do to learn how to write better?' I would tell them to go find a peer review site and start reviewing. IMO, that is the fastest path (along with putting up stuff and getting reviews as well). And stick with anything you start, whether it is good or bad. The bad stuff is more educational.
From the published authors, I also tend to pick up a lot. People tell me I use comma's and semicolon's wrong. Well, I pay close attention to how other authors are using them, and try to put this 'weakness' behind me. (Though I must say, I think a lot of it is just nitpicking, and I kind of go along with, if it succeeds in making the story clearer, then I guess it works). Beyond grammar, I think of my own writing, and things I am struggling with, such as world building, for instance, and I may start to notice how the other authors have incorporated their own world building into their works. Was it subtle, direct, infodumpy...whatever. If I find some ways that I think work, I might say I can use a similar technique on my own. Often I cannot, because my voice is my own and it does not lend itself to others very well, but sometimes, I think, ‘Yeah, I can do something like that which I just read’. Another thing I find I pick up, is just words. Sometimes words I did not know, and sometimes words used in ways I would not likely have considered.
(And I might add, when I read the opening to Game of thrones, I felt I learned something. Cause I had never thought to include a detail like the sweat worn handle of a sword, or the taste of a knife as one was climbing a tree. I don’t know if I can use it, but….It’s got me thinking about fleshing things out.)
Other things I tend to learn, are just trends. What has the evolution of this genre's writing been? What is currently hot, and where do I think it is going? Maybe a little of who does it well, and who is over-rated. I feel I follow that too.
I read Steven King's book on writing (Wasn't that the name, on writing?). I must say, I found I was in agreement with him a lot in that work, but I dont like anything I have ever read that Steven King has done, go figure.
Oh, and I should also add, by reading a lot of stuff (cause I do,) it keeps the idea factory going. Been thinking a lot of Malik's comments about steel and armor of late. And on a bit of other research about leather and gambeson armor, and I am thinking I might make a change, but I might not. I don't know.
I am not a reader, and I don't enjoy it. In fact, I almost never read for enjoyment, and almost always just to learn something. This includes reading works that are meant for enjoyment, such as many great works of fiction. I don't know if that makes this a question for me, or not, but I do feel I have something to add.
Without question, I have read a lot of bad fiction, and I have learned the most from it. Mostly, I learn a lot of stuff not to do. Such as, don’t make weird unpronounceable names for your main characters. Or, if the story is going well and engaging, dont trek off to someplace completely away from that. Or don’t just give me a story so I can go, 'wow, what a cool villain' (hint, I won’t think your villain is cool). Or send me a piece of work and expect me to do all of your proof reading for you. Or, miss big items, like conflict (um…is it even a story if there is no conflict?), or good characters, or good opportunities for foreshadowing. Or, bury me in many pages of thick dense prose telling me the color of trees, and the sounds of birds, and majesty of the mountains. In fact, I feel I have learned so much for bad writing, that I think, without question, if someone was to ask me 'what can I do to learn how to write better?' I would tell them to go find a peer review site and start reviewing. IMO, that is the fastest path (along with putting up stuff and getting reviews as well). And stick with anything you start, whether it is good or bad. The bad stuff is more educational.
From the published authors, I also tend to pick up a lot. People tell me I use comma's and semicolon's wrong. Well, I pay close attention to how other authors are using them, and try to put this 'weakness' behind me. (Though I must say, I think a lot of it is just nitpicking, and I kind of go along with, if it succeeds in making the story clearer, then I guess it works). Beyond grammar, I think of my own writing, and things I am struggling with, such as world building, for instance, and I may start to notice how the other authors have incorporated their own world building into their works. Was it subtle, direct, infodumpy...whatever. If I find some ways that I think work, I might say I can use a similar technique on my own. Often I cannot, because my voice is my own and it does not lend itself to others very well, but sometimes, I think, ‘Yeah, I can do something like that which I just read’. Another thing I find I pick up, is just words. Sometimes words I did not know, and sometimes words used in ways I would not likely have considered.
(And I might add, when I read the opening to Game of thrones, I felt I learned something. Cause I had never thought to include a detail like the sweat worn handle of a sword, or the taste of a knife as one was climbing a tree. I don’t know if I can use it, but….It’s got me thinking about fleshing things out.)
Other things I tend to learn, are just trends. What has the evolution of this genre's writing been? What is currently hot, and where do I think it is going? Maybe a little of who does it well, and who is over-rated. I feel I follow that too.
I read Steven King's book on writing (Wasn't that the name, on writing?). I must say, I found I was in agreement with him a lot in that work, but I dont like anything I have ever read that Steven King has done, go figure.
Oh, and I should also add, by reading a lot of stuff (cause I do,) it keeps the idea factory going. Been thinking a lot of Malik's comments about steel and armor of late. And on a bit of other research about leather and gambeson armor, and I am thinking I might make a change, but I might not. I don't know.
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