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I spent part of my morning moving sentences around to squeeze a little more impact from the beginning of my scene. So...no words, just better sentences.
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Aaagh. I'm 3159 words into my project and I'm getting stalled. I need my MC's love interest to separate (temporarily) from the MC and villain, but she doesn't want to leave the MC in the villain's clutches now that she knows hints of what's going on between them. Grrr. Even if I have her vanish for her own safety's sake, she'd want to bring the MC with her, and that won't work. Not yet, anyway.