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I have noticed that I use a lot of commas when I write. For example a sentence might read:
He wearily arose to full height, slighty staggering from fatigue.
1) Should I write it like this or should I say, "He wearily arose to full height slighty staggering from fatigue." I typically write long sentences and like to use commas for breaks.
2) Is this sentence written properly?
The priests are able to invoke the holy power of thier god, and by being blessed in return, can wield his divine power.
3) I use italics to have the reader know what the MC is thinking. Is this written properly?
Gervas, he thought to himself. I must warn him!
Do you need to also make the punctuation italicized? For example, after Gervas there is a comma and I kept it in italics font
Thanks for any help/corrections you can give me!
He wearily arose to full height, slighty staggering from fatigue.
1) Should I write it like this or should I say, "He wearily arose to full height slighty staggering from fatigue." I typically write long sentences and like to use commas for breaks.
2) Is this sentence written properly?
The priests are able to invoke the holy power of thier god, and by being blessed in return, can wield his divine power.
3) I use italics to have the reader know what the MC is thinking. Is this written properly?
Gervas, he thought to himself. I must warn him!
Do you need to also make the punctuation italicized? For example, after Gervas there is a comma and I kept it in italics font
Thanks for any help/corrections you can give me!
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