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Speech tags--why the hate?

pskelding

Troubadour
I replied to a thread similar to this and will repeat the advice I gave before. Michael Stackpole has an excellent podcast on his free (last I checked) Secrets series in which he dicusses dialogue tags and gives some clear exercises on how to minimize them. I highly recommend it.

I've become a fan of the Joe Abercrombie school of dialogue tags, I try to minimize them as much as possible and instead use gestures seen by the POV character to establish who is saying what. It seems more natural. I only use tags when I want to emphasize something or establishing in the beginning of dialogue.
 

SeverinR

Vala
As others have said, when you try to get cute with dialogue attributions is when the trouble begins.

"Amy's a snot," she giggled.

Yeh, see if you can say that and giggle at the same time.

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I'm no expert, but the few times I see these type, I assume they say, and then do the action.
Basically:
"Amy's a snot." She (said and then) giggled.

I fully agree not using the ones you can do together, like:
"Rude" He burped.
Some people can burp words, so there is some confusion.
"Snakessss." she hissed. I don't think people really do the cat thing while talking, maybe a cat lord or a talking snake? (We are in fantasy.)

I would say, think about what you use, for unintended humor and weird meanings.

"How about the occasional swifty?" I ask curiously.
 
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