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Storytelling Question

Vidar

Scribe
Not sure if it has been mentioned already, sorry for not reading all of the posts in advance...

Both actions seem far to similar in my eyes although plausible, personally I would maybe have your merchant character fiddle with a single coin passing it through his fingers or some such. Maybe if your soldiers characters sword has some sort of decoration like some tassels he could maybe fidget with that instead somehow
 
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