DassaultMirage
Minstrel
So in my WIP, after four months or so of tinkering, I finally have a magic system working, but of course it needs more ironing and more pair of eyes to look at it for holes I might have missed.
A brief history. The Erelims and Fallens were ancient beings locked in eternal conflict against each other. The former seeks to protect the human race, the most beloved creations of the highest god, Ein Sof. The latter wants to destroy it. Eventually, by allowing themselves to be mortals for the duration of their battles, the world became their battlefield. Why Ein Sof stood still for thousands of years as his most beloved creations were being destroyed was known only to him, but he finally had enough of it and banished the Erelims and the Fallens, forcing both sides to never return to the world. To accomplish this, Ein Sof created The Rift, a barrier of his own, raw magic that wrapped around the world, preventing the Erelims and Fallens from returning to the world.
The Rift is basically maintained by the Sorceresses of the Rift. These sorceresses were mortals (though Ein Sif's own magic made them able to live for that long), and somehow blessed, forced, or cursed by Ein Sof to be the living anchors that maintained The Rift. A thousand years ago, a scholar named Junri tested his hypothesis that magic could return to the world if the sorceresses were to vanish. With the aid of one sorceress too tired of her eternal duty, Junri was able to kill one of the sorceresses. Her death created a hole in The Rift, and from that hole, magic could indeed return, yet not enough for the Erelims and the Fallens to squeeze through. Junri's hypothesis proved correct. The magic from the Erelims and the Fallens seeping in from those holes were only for the humans to use.
Now, the magic system. When a human is born, he is offered. Pretty much like a baptismal of sorts. Using Abraham's Stone Tables (each major nation has a couple of these), the human is offered to the Erelims. It goes like this. I lack sleep sorry. I'm getting drowsy.
If a flame from heaven swirls down and engulfs the baby, then the high erelim of the flames accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many fire erelims.
If a localized rain pour only on the stone table, then the high erelim of the waters accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many water erelims.
If the stone table grew in size and rocked as if enjoying holding him, then the high erelim of the earth accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many earth erelims.
If a cushion of air lifted and seemingly cradled him, then the high erelim of the winds accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many wind erelims.
As for the Fallens, well, if the parents are loon enough to offer their child to them, then they would use the fangs of Agaras' Basilisks. These are basically humongous skulls of basilisks. The baby would be placed on the mouth. For a moment, the skull would be sentient and its ghastly flesh would regrow. The baby would be breathed and engulfed in purple flames if a high Fallen of the flames accepted him. He would be breathed and engulfed in purple fluids if it was a high Fallen of the waters. Black vines would sprout from the ground and hug the skeleton and the baby itself if a high Fallen of the earth accepted him and he would be breathed then encapsulated in a purple miasma if it was a wind Fallen who accepted him. Same goes here as with the Erelims. Once accepted, the human can now learn and use one of the magical disciplines of whomever Fallen he desired.
Now, be it Erelims or Fallens, once accepted, the human will have a glowing spot at the back of his neck. Blue for water. Red for fire. Green for earth. Grey for wind. Then they can now be referred to as practitioners. Once they received proper training, then the proper titles will follow. Practitioners can be mages, druids, clerics, spellswords and many more.
There are special cases however.
For the Erelims, it would be the Damocleses. Damocleses were humans accepted by a specific Erelim. These Erelims were basically those on the upper echelons. I only listed 148 of them, but an Erelim could have more than one Damocles. In my story's recorded history, one Erelim once had four Damocleses at the same time. The magic that a Damocles would possess would be phenomenal and would greatly mimic the style of his Erelim. Let's just say one Damocles = 12 highly trained practitioners.
For the Fallens, these would be the Nephilims. I said earlier that Erelims and Fallens took on mortal forms, but the former's remains were all lost to human experimentation that yielded no known results. Nephilims were formed when a practitioner ingested the preserved parts of a Fallen. If his body could take it, he would be the dark counterpart of the Damocles. If not, his body explodes then he dies.
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I need insights on this. Any suggestions to improve my system? Any holes that I need to seal? Oh and there will be a hell lot of people that will have no magic. They would be offered to both Erelims and Fallens but kapoot. Nothing will happen. Is that fine for that injustice to occur? I will appreciate all comments. Thanks.
A brief history. The Erelims and Fallens were ancient beings locked in eternal conflict against each other. The former seeks to protect the human race, the most beloved creations of the highest god, Ein Sof. The latter wants to destroy it. Eventually, by allowing themselves to be mortals for the duration of their battles, the world became their battlefield. Why Ein Sof stood still for thousands of years as his most beloved creations were being destroyed was known only to him, but he finally had enough of it and banished the Erelims and the Fallens, forcing both sides to never return to the world. To accomplish this, Ein Sof created The Rift, a barrier of his own, raw magic that wrapped around the world, preventing the Erelims and Fallens from returning to the world.
The Rift is basically maintained by the Sorceresses of the Rift. These sorceresses were mortals (though Ein Sif's own magic made them able to live for that long), and somehow blessed, forced, or cursed by Ein Sof to be the living anchors that maintained The Rift. A thousand years ago, a scholar named Junri tested his hypothesis that magic could return to the world if the sorceresses were to vanish. With the aid of one sorceress too tired of her eternal duty, Junri was able to kill one of the sorceresses. Her death created a hole in The Rift, and from that hole, magic could indeed return, yet not enough for the Erelims and the Fallens to squeeze through. Junri's hypothesis proved correct. The magic from the Erelims and the Fallens seeping in from those holes were only for the humans to use.
Now, the magic system. When a human is born, he is offered. Pretty much like a baptismal of sorts. Using Abraham's Stone Tables (each major nation has a couple of these), the human is offered to the Erelims. It goes like this. I lack sleep sorry. I'm getting drowsy.
If a flame from heaven swirls down and engulfs the baby, then the high erelim of the flames accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many fire erelims.
If a localized rain pour only on the stone table, then the high erelim of the waters accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many water erelims.
If the stone table grew in size and rocked as if enjoying holding him, then the high erelim of the earth accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many earth erelims.
If a cushion of air lifted and seemingly cradled him, then the high erelim of the winds accepted him. He can then learn and use the magical disciplines of any of the many wind erelims.
As for the Fallens, well, if the parents are loon enough to offer their child to them, then they would use the fangs of Agaras' Basilisks. These are basically humongous skulls of basilisks. The baby would be placed on the mouth. For a moment, the skull would be sentient and its ghastly flesh would regrow. The baby would be breathed and engulfed in purple flames if a high Fallen of the flames accepted him. He would be breathed and engulfed in purple fluids if it was a high Fallen of the waters. Black vines would sprout from the ground and hug the skeleton and the baby itself if a high Fallen of the earth accepted him and he would be breathed then encapsulated in a purple miasma if it was a wind Fallen who accepted him. Same goes here as with the Erelims. Once accepted, the human can now learn and use one of the magical disciplines of whomever Fallen he desired.
Now, be it Erelims or Fallens, once accepted, the human will have a glowing spot at the back of his neck. Blue for water. Red for fire. Green for earth. Grey for wind. Then they can now be referred to as practitioners. Once they received proper training, then the proper titles will follow. Practitioners can be mages, druids, clerics, spellswords and many more.
There are special cases however.
For the Erelims, it would be the Damocleses. Damocleses were humans accepted by a specific Erelim. These Erelims were basically those on the upper echelons. I only listed 148 of them, but an Erelim could have more than one Damocles. In my story's recorded history, one Erelim once had four Damocleses at the same time. The magic that a Damocles would possess would be phenomenal and would greatly mimic the style of his Erelim. Let's just say one Damocles = 12 highly trained practitioners.
For the Fallens, these would be the Nephilims. I said earlier that Erelims and Fallens took on mortal forms, but the former's remains were all lost to human experimentation that yielded no known results. Nephilims were formed when a practitioner ingested the preserved parts of a Fallen. If his body could take it, he would be the dark counterpart of the Damocles. If not, his body explodes then he dies.
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I need insights on this. Any suggestions to improve my system? Any holes that I need to seal? Oh and there will be a hell lot of people that will have no magic. They would be offered to both Erelims and Fallens but kapoot. Nothing will happen. Is that fine for that injustice to occur? I will appreciate all comments. Thanks.
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