Ireth
Myth Weaver
A fight scene wherein five of the eight participants are invisible, that's what.
I have the following scenario: Vincent and Dom, two humans, are being accosted in Vincent's home by a group of Fae, on the charge of harboring Fae fugitives. (They're half-right -- there is one Fae fugitive in the house, but the Fae are looking for two.) Vincent and Dom guard the front door from inside, armed with iron frying pans; they do not know how many Fae are outside the house (twelve in all). The fugitive, Loegaire, escapes the house, but is caught by the Fae waiting for him outside. Six of their number, led by one named Éanna, sneak into the house to arrest Vincent, Dom, and Vincent's daughter Ariel; the other six guard Loegaire.
Ariel is currently locked in her upstairs bedroom room, surrounded by as much iron as she could find so the Fae can't get at her. Vincent hears the Fae sneaking into his house through an upstairs window in the room across from Ariel's, which was left open (by Loegaire, who jumped out of it to escape), and he and Dom run upstairs to protect Ariel if need be. The Fae are invisible under their Glamour illusions, but the great amount of iron nearby disrupts it to a degree, making the air shimmer.
Éanna, one of the six invisible Fae, becomes visible again and reveals that Loegaire has been caught; he tries to get Vincent to unlock Ariel's door so he can search for the other fugitive he believes to be hiding there. Vincent refuses, and orders him and his company to leave. Éanna orders the other five Fae to disarm him and Dom, and fighting ensues while the humans defend themselves.
My intention for the scene is to have Vincent and Dom hold their own against the Fae for a while, but ultimately be disarmed and arrested -- without anyone falling down the stairs and breaking their neck. Ariel will be left alone, as the Fae deem it too much of a hassle to try to get past that much iron in such a small space. Given that 5/6 of the Fae are invisible (unless they come into contact with the iron), and the scene is from Vincent's POV (he's not Fae-sighted, so the only way he can see through the Fae's Glamour is by the iron's disruption, or if they will it), this is proving to be a very tricky scene to write.
Any suggestions as to how I can keep this from being too confusing are welcome. ^^
I have the following scenario: Vincent and Dom, two humans, are being accosted in Vincent's home by a group of Fae, on the charge of harboring Fae fugitives. (They're half-right -- there is one Fae fugitive in the house, but the Fae are looking for two.) Vincent and Dom guard the front door from inside, armed with iron frying pans; they do not know how many Fae are outside the house (twelve in all). The fugitive, Loegaire, escapes the house, but is caught by the Fae waiting for him outside. Six of their number, led by one named Éanna, sneak into the house to arrest Vincent, Dom, and Vincent's daughter Ariel; the other six guard Loegaire.
Ariel is currently locked in her upstairs bedroom room, surrounded by as much iron as she could find so the Fae can't get at her. Vincent hears the Fae sneaking into his house through an upstairs window in the room across from Ariel's, which was left open (by Loegaire, who jumped out of it to escape), and he and Dom run upstairs to protect Ariel if need be. The Fae are invisible under their Glamour illusions, but the great amount of iron nearby disrupts it to a degree, making the air shimmer.
Éanna, one of the six invisible Fae, becomes visible again and reveals that Loegaire has been caught; he tries to get Vincent to unlock Ariel's door so he can search for the other fugitive he believes to be hiding there. Vincent refuses, and orders him and his company to leave. Éanna orders the other five Fae to disarm him and Dom, and fighting ensues while the humans defend themselves.
My intention for the scene is to have Vincent and Dom hold their own against the Fae for a while, but ultimately be disarmed and arrested -- without anyone falling down the stairs and breaking their neck. Ariel will be left alone, as the Fae deem it too much of a hassle to try to get past that much iron in such a small space. Given that 5/6 of the Fae are invisible (unless they come into contact with the iron), and the scene is from Vincent's POV (he's not Fae-sighted, so the only way he can see through the Fae's Glamour is by the iron's disruption, or if they will it), this is proving to be a very tricky scene to write.
Any suggestions as to how I can keep this from being too confusing are welcome. ^^