Queshire
Istar
So, I'm considering changing my main character's power. Originally I just had her have pretty simple telekinesis / levitation, but now I'm considering going with something different.
She has a pocket dimension she has access to. She can either shift entirely into this pocket dimension or just reach into it with her arms to pull like a weapon or something out of it. She can also sense what's going on in there. The pocket dimension is a bit unstable so it's possible to physically break out of it. Basically, while it can be used as a prison it's a pretty bad one and that's where all her stuff is. Physically, her hidey hole is about the size of a little girl's room because, well, it was a little girl's room. It was originally based off her room when she was ten, though she has significantly redecorated since then. Ummm.... I figure that later on in the story she'll learn how to alter the physical settings of her hidey hole, maybe one day increasing to the point that her hidey hole takes the form of a small tropical island.
Her other power is related to that, she's not limited to shifting to and from her hidey hole, she can shift between different world and alternative reality, though it's a whole lot harder than shifting to her personal world. She needs to concentrate and it takes a good bit out of her. This isn't unique to her, part of my story is that the walls between worlds and alternative realities have broken down, however most people need to use specially designed world ships or portals to travel between realities. Being able to shift freely is unusual but not rare.
NOW THEN!
What I would like from you guys,
1) What do you guys think of this power? Does it seem interesting? Is it generic? Can you guys see imagine any problems or challenge I might run into with this power?
2)How can you guys imagine this power being used? How can you see it being used in battle? How can you see it being used in every day life? What's the most crazy awesome use for it can you think up?
Any help would be greatly appreciated!
She has a pocket dimension she has access to. She can either shift entirely into this pocket dimension or just reach into it with her arms to pull like a weapon or something out of it. She can also sense what's going on in there. The pocket dimension is a bit unstable so it's possible to physically break out of it. Basically, while it can be used as a prison it's a pretty bad one and that's where all her stuff is. Physically, her hidey hole is about the size of a little girl's room because, well, it was a little girl's room. It was originally based off her room when she was ten, though she has significantly redecorated since then. Ummm.... I figure that later on in the story she'll learn how to alter the physical settings of her hidey hole, maybe one day increasing to the point that her hidey hole takes the form of a small tropical island.
Her other power is related to that, she's not limited to shifting to and from her hidey hole, she can shift between different world and alternative reality, though it's a whole lot harder than shifting to her personal world. She needs to concentrate and it takes a good bit out of her. This isn't unique to her, part of my story is that the walls between worlds and alternative realities have broken down, however most people need to use specially designed world ships or portals to travel between realities. Being able to shift freely is unusual but not rare.
NOW THEN!
What I would like from you guys,
1) What do you guys think of this power? Does it seem interesting? Is it generic? Can you guys see imagine any problems or challenge I might run into with this power?
2)How can you guys imagine this power being used? How can you see it being used in battle? How can you see it being used in every day life? What's the most crazy awesome use for it can you think up?
Any help would be greatly appreciated!