DianthasProphecy
Minstrel
ARGH! Hair pulling time again. I've got some written on the first chapter. So far it acquaints the reader with the type of town, superstitions of the town, hints about a past tragedy, begins to show what type of person my MC is. Also acquaints reader with a kindly old man from town, showing what type of folks live in the town. Skipped all those dumb minute details about clothes and hair color. (Those annoy me, so many writers can't just say he crossed his ankles, they have to say he crossed one Prada shoe over the other. I don't particularly care about the brand of shoe...lol. sorry, ranting)
I just feel like something is missing. I want to add in a little bit of action, nothing big, but something to tell readers that my book is worth reading. That there will be some really great parts to it. Know what I mean?
How do you pick that perfect thing to round out your chapters? The first chapter is Oh So Important.
(I know that the grammar and punctuation in this post sucks. I'm feeding a one year old lunch and typing at the same time. Forgive me this one. I'll do better next time. )
I just feel like something is missing. I want to add in a little bit of action, nothing big, but something to tell readers that my book is worth reading. That there will be some really great parts to it. Know what I mean?
How do you pick that perfect thing to round out your chapters? The first chapter is Oh So Important.
(I know that the grammar and punctuation in this post sucks. I'm feeding a one year old lunch and typing at the same time. Forgive me this one. I'll do better next time. )