SeverinR
Vala
My MC is singing the lullaby to the hatchling, how do I properly write it?
This is how I wrote it out first, is it correct?
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The hatchling finally stumbles free of the egg, and tumbles in front of its mother, looking up at her with a coo, her mother replies with a similar sound. Without thought, Melima softly begins an elven lullaby.
Sleep, katinar, Sleep
The unicorns frolic in the prairie
Their soft coat is white as sleet.
Dancing in moonlight so merry
Sleep, katinar, sleep
The hatchling slowly turns looking at her, and coos at her as she continues her song.
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This is how I wrote it out first, is it correct?
***
The hatchling finally stumbles free of the egg, and tumbles in front of its mother, looking up at her with a coo, her mother replies with a similar sound. Without thought, Melima softly begins an elven lullaby.
Sleep, katinar, Sleep
The unicorns frolic in the prairie
Their soft coat is white as sleet.
Dancing in moonlight so merry
Sleep, katinar, sleep
The hatchling slowly turns looking at her, and coos at her as she continues her song.
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