siddarajuck
Acolyte
I want to write a guard looking for a person .is eye sight,face Expressions,body moments, breathing,and running foot steps. Someone give this scene details
Find a mirror and, standing in front of it, look at the reflection of your face. Now pull a few faces and think how you might describe them. Think about how you react when you're frightened or surprised or angry. Then try to think how your face reacts and try to put that expression on your face. Try to find words to describe those expressions. Look at pictures of people who are angry etc and try to describe them in words. Practice. It's the only way you ever learn to write.I am not good at face Expressions write that's why
Which reminds me that I was wanting to comment:I can't help but wonder why this guard's facial expression is the most important thing in the whole story. I'm skeptical about that.
Is this flash fiction?