Trick
Auror
I'm debating rearranging the beginning of my WIP. It starts with my MC recounting the first time he stole something (candy, at five years old) but in the next scene he's seven watching his father be beaten to death by a policemen (think of the policemen in my world like an overly violent version of the Nazi Gestapo, not good men risking their lives to protect the populace).
My question is, would it be too confusing to jump from seven years old back to five years old? I was thinking of making it a very short flashback to being five but I'm not sure how I feel about it. Also, is opening with a child witnessing a brutal murder a bit too darkly charged?
My question is, would it be too confusing to jump from seven years old back to five years old? I was thinking of making it a very short flashback to being five but I'm not sure how I feel about it. Also, is opening with a child witnessing a brutal murder a bit too darkly charged?