JOHANNEITOR33
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Hi, the book im writing is based in an invented world and im having doubts when it comes to the history of this world.
I would like it to be this way: For so many years people lived peacefully in this huge terrain, but one day, because of a supernatural thing men started having problems with each other, they started fighting and everything goes bad.
So because of this fightings, a wealthy woman buys a big terrain and proclame herself empress, making her the first gobernor of this little word. Also, with time, other persons would follow her example and name themselves gobernors of the land they bought.
So my questions are, does this make sense? or is it impossible? How could I do it instead?
PS: Sorry if the question is messy or the english is bad, im still learning
I would like it to be this way: For so many years people lived peacefully in this huge terrain, but one day, because of a supernatural thing men started having problems with each other, they started fighting and everything goes bad.
So because of this fightings, a wealthy woman buys a big terrain and proclame herself empress, making her the first gobernor of this little word. Also, with time, other persons would follow her example and name themselves gobernors of the land they bought.
So my questions are, does this make sense? or is it impossible? How could I do it instead?
PS: Sorry if the question is messy or the english is bad, im still learning